Just have time to make very quick notes - typo near the bottom of p1 "aarchivist", and near the bottom of p2 "just started small pot" should be "a small pot".
Your "public outreach" section should cover "service-minded" nicely; and "tidy" and "reliable" are best shown by example, ie CV layout, which looks fine, and dress/punctuality/etc if/when you get to turn up for an interview. [Usually when applications require specific skills, I try to be really explicit and ideally echo the exact words the ad uses, in case applications are being screened by an agency or the organisation's HR department, who don't always know what things mean in the specific field, but these particular qualities seem straightforward enough for even them to understand.]
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Date: 2020-12-28 09:53 am (UTC)Your "public outreach" section should cover "service-minded" nicely; and "tidy" and "reliable" are best shown by example, ie CV layout, which looks fine, and dress/punctuality/etc if/when you get to turn up for an interview. [Usually when applications require specific skills, I try to be really explicit and ideally echo the exact words the ad uses, in case applications are being screened by an agency or the organisation's HR department, who don't always know what things mean in the specific field, but these particular qualities seem straightforward enough for even them to understand.]