Thanks! Since I sent Krysta this chapter last night before going to sleep, I'll wait and send you the next one (sure more than one set of eyes could be good, but I don't have the time to do multiple revisions to anything other than the abstract, which, when it is finally ready, will probably be posted here for as much feeback as possible).

If for some reason the next chapter happens to be ready for editing at a time you are too busy, no worries, let me know and I'll post again looking to see who has time that day...